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    Dorothy Tells Detective Hunt About the Father She Never Met

    from The Old Man & the Gun

    Written by David Lowery

    The Old Man & the Gun

    2 min · 2 characters · Any gender · 35-45

    Dorothy discusses her estranged criminal father with Detective John Hunt, revealing the emotional toll of his absence and her desire for justice.

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    JOHN HUNT

    You mind if I record this?

    DOROTHY

    No, go ahead.

    JOHN HUNT

    Okay. Sorry, keep going.

    DOROTHY

    He and my mom were only together for two years. I never met him, that I can recall. By the time I was born he was in prison. My brother says he remembers him a little bit but... I don’t know if he does or he just thinks he does. You hear a story and…

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    Scene Notes & Audition Tips

    5 sections
    About This Scene

    Dorothy sits down at her kitchen table with Detective John Hunt to discuss her estranged father, an elusive criminal Hunt is pursuing. While her young son plays nearby, Dorothy reflects on growing up with romanticized fabrications about an absent parent, contrasting childhood fantasies with the eventual cold reality of abandonment and criminal recidivism. Written by David Lowery, the scene balances the procedural framework of an informal police inquiry with an intimate domestic setting, creating an understated exploration of unresolved family secrets, estrangement, and personal boundaries.

    Character Analysis

    Dorothy is guarded yet remarkably candid, carrying the quiet ache of a child who was never sought out by the man who fathered her. Rather than seeking reconciliation or indulging in sentimentality, she maintains clear boundaries to protect her current life, offering information while firmly refusing to be pulled into her father's legal aftermath. Detective John Hunt presents a calm, empathetic authority figure who listens rather than interrogates. As a parent himself, Hunt recognizes the domestic gravity of her revelation, matching Dorothy's vulnerability with professional respect, patience, and gentle restraint.

    Why This Works for Auditions

    This scene offers two grounded, naturalistic roles that avoid overt melodrama in favor of subtle, conversational realism. Dorothy’s speech provides an actor with an exceptional opportunity to demonstrate narrative delivery, emotional economy, and the tension between outward composure and lingering resentment. For the actor playing Hunt, the material serves as an excellent masterclass in active listening, generous scene partnership, and quiet status management. Running roughly two minutes, the duologue provides an efficient showcase of emotional depth suitable for camera work.

    Best Suited For

    Actors searching for contemporary dramatic material will find this exchange particularly rewarding for self-tapes, agent showcases, and general scene study. It is an ideal fit for performers in the 35 to 45 age range who fit detective, working-class, or everyday parent casting profiles. The piece also works well for audition pairings seeking character-driven realism that highlights chemistry, focus, and restraint rather than aggressive conflict.

    Performance Tips

    Actors should resist the urge to turn the conversation into an overly dramatic confession, focusing instead on the practical reality of living with long-term absence. The actor playing Dorothy should deliver her family history with a matter-of-fact rhythm, allowing the deeper emotional weight to surface through small hesitations and quiet shifts in focus. Hunt must avoid playing a standard, detached law enforcement trope, leaning instead into open body language and genuine reactions that invite trust. Keep the physical life grounded within the casual environment of a working kitchen table.

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