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    Lee Demands Money From Her Agent Marjorie

    from Can You Ever Forgive Me?

    Written by Nicole Holofcener and Jeff Whitty

    Can You Ever Forgive Me?

    2 min · 2 characters · Any gender · 45-55

    Lee Israel desperately demands a book advance from her agent, Marjorie, who delivers a harsh reality check about Lee's failing career and attitude.

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    LEE

    I hear they got Tom Clancy three million dollars to write some more red-baiting propaganda?

    MARJORIE

    Lee - I’ve had too long a morning already for this.

    LEE

    He’s a fraud.

    MARJORIE

    What is your point?

    LEE

    He was drinking sherry at your party. No self-respecting writer would drink sherry.

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    About This Scene

    Written by Nicole Holofcener and Jeff Whitty, this intense comedy-drama duologue captures a sharp breaking point between an abrasive author and her exasperated literary agent. Desperate for funds to cover overdue rent and urgent personal bills, Lee corners Marjorie in her office to demand a substantial advance on an uncommissioned biography. What begins as an aggressive deflection quickly turns into a blunt confrontation as Marjorie dismantles Lee's excuses and forces her to confront the grim reality of her failing career.

    Character Analysis

    Lee is an uncompromising outsider whose biting intellect masks severe personal and financial panic. Unwilling to flatter the publishing establishment, Lee weaponizes sarcasm and artistic entitlement to defend personal dignity, though deep vulnerability surfaces the moment reality intrudes. Marjorie represents practical authority and executive endurance, having shielded her difficult client for years before finally reaching an absolute breaking point. Marjorie speaks with crisp, unvarnished candour, refusing to indulge Lee's hostility any longer while balancing professional boundaries with lingering professional familiarity.

    Why This Works for Auditions

    This two-minute scene delivers an immediate power struggle with high professional stakes and sharp, rhythmic dialogue. Both roles offer performers distinct tonal shifts, moving from snide workplace banter to raw, cutting reality. It provides casting directors with a clear demonstration of active listening, dynamic status adjustments, and the ability to expose genuine dramatic pain beneath bitter comedic irony.

    Best Suited For

    This piece is well suited for mature performers in the 45 to 55 age bracket who excel at grounded, gritty character work or executive roles. It serves as an effective showcase piece for agent meetings, advanced scene study, or high-stakes self-tapes requiring fast-paced dialogue and complex, adversarial dynamics.

    Performance Tips

    Actors playing Lee should anchor the character's abrasive arrogance in genuine terror, ensuring the demands feel like a panicked last resort rather than simple rudeness. For Marjorie, the delivery needs controlled fatigue rather than instant rage, allowing the frustration to build steadily until the final list of hard truths lands cleanly. Resist the temptation to play the interaction as broad comedy, as the humour resonates most powerfully when both performers commit fully to the professional desperation and bruised pride driving the argument.

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