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    Lightning for Lightning at the Dentist

    from Song Sung Blue

    Written by Craig Brewer

    Song Sung Blue

    While getting a dental implant, a struggling Elvis impersonator argues with his manager about alimony, garnished wages, and his refusal to play Don Ho.

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    DR. DAVE WATSON

    Open wide. You could park a car in that gap.

    MIKE

    I’ll take a Cadillac.

    DR. DAVE WATSON

    Got something better. Take a look. Lightning for Lightning.

    MIKE

    WOW! So, when I smile I’ll be, like, advertising. That’s smart. See, that’s why you’re my manager, Dr. Dave. Always thinkin’.

    DR. DAVE WATSON

    Beth’s lawyer called. How many months late…

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    Scene Notes & Audition Tips

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    About This Scene

    Set in a contemporary dental office, this two-minute dramatic scene presents a quirky blend of physical comedy and harsh reality. While receiving a customized tooth implant, a struggling performer named Mike faces a reckoning from his dentist and manager, Dr. Dave Watson. The conversation quickly shifts from promotional dental work to mounting financial troubles, garnished wages, unpaid alimony, and a recently sabotaged gig opportunity.

    Character Analysis

    Mike is an earnest working-class dreamer caught between the demands of adult responsibility and an unyielding commitment to his stage identity. He genuinely wants to provide for his daughter, but his refusal to sacrifice his creative self-respect keeps him broke. Dr. Dave Watson represents the pragmatic authority figure who must balance professional healthcare duties with the thankless task of managing an erratic client. Dave maintains a dry, grounded demeanor, attempting to steer Mike toward basic financial survival.

    Why This Works for Auditions

    This piece serves as an exceptional showcase because it establishes strong interpersonal history and high personal stakes within an unconventional setting. Casting directors get to see dynamic status shifts between a medical professional and a vulnerable patient without losing the dramatic weight of real-world debt. The blend of quirky humor and underlying desperation offers actors a rich canvas to display comedic timing without sacrificing emotional truth.

    Best Suited For

    The material is ideally suited for character actors and everyman casting types in the thirty-five to forty-five age bracket. It offers fantastic audition material for self-tapes, agent showcases, and scene study partnerships. Both roles provide distinct vocal rhythms and contrasting worldviews that make for a compelling two-person dialogue.

    Performance Tips

    Resist the temptation to overplay the comedy or lean into caricature. The scene is far more effective when Mike truly believes in the legitimacy of his artistic choices, making his refusal to play other acts feel like an existential crisis rather than petty pride. For the actor playing Dave, let the physical routine of the dental procedure dictate your pacing, letting the clinical environment ground your managerial frustration. Keep the financial stress authentic and immediate so the final bargain feels earned.

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