Pip and Ravi investigate Sal's old bedroom and discover his final text messages. Upon closer inspection of the grammar and punctuation, they realize the confession text was likely written by someone else, confirming their suspicions of a cover-up.
RAVI: It’s Sal’s.
RAVI: Read this.
PIP: The confession.
PIP: It was me. I did it. I’m so sorry. The grammar.
PIP: The last text, the punctuation is perfect, but the others...
RAVI: Sal was the smartest person I knew but he texted like an illiterate.
PIP: He didn’t write the confession. So if he didn’t write it, who did?
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