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    A Diagnosis of Symptoms

    from Creditors

    Written by August Strindberg

    Gustav psychologically manipulates the fragile Adolph by describing a graphic medical condition, convincing him that his marriage is killing him.

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    GUSTAV

    Do you know, my dear friend--I hate to speak of it, but you are already showing the first symptoms of epilepsy.

    ADOLPH

    I! How can you tell?

    GUSTAV

    Because I have watched the symptoms in a younger brother of mine who had been worshipping Venus a little too excessively.

    ADOLPH

    How--how did it show itself--that thing you spoke of?

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    About This Scene

    Taken from August Strindberg's classical drama Creditors, this intense two-minute duologue is a chilling demonstration of psychological warfare and manipulation. Gustav systematically dismantles the fragile Adolph by describing a graphic medical condition, leading his companion to believe that his own marriage is slowly destroying him. The piece creates immediate, claustrophobic tension through an insidious power struggle between two men bound by unspoken tension. It offers a rare, compressed dramatic arc where dialogue creates direct physical consequences in the room.

    Character Analysis

    Gustav is sophisticated, controlled, and deeply calculating, wielding his words like surgical instruments to destabilize his companion. He presents himself as an empathetic mentor while deliberately steering the conversation toward dread and bodily terror. In stark contrast, Adolph is anxious, impressionable, and profoundly vulnerable. As Adolph absorbs Gustav's hypnotic suggestions, his psychological defenses crumble, causing him to internalize and physically reflect the terrifying illness being described to him.

    Why This Works for Auditions

    This selection provides performers with a sustained, high-stakes dynamic that demands complete concentration and nuanced interaction between scene partners. Rather than relying on theatrical outbursts, the scene builds dramatic weight through steady psychological escalation and vivid storytelling. For Gustav, it demonstrates exceptional vocal control, status dominance, and subtle villainy. For Adolph, it highlights raw emotional availability, high stakes, and the rare talent for active, transformative listening.

    Best Suited For

    This duologue is ideally matched for drama school auditions, industry agent showcases, and focused scene study practice. Male performers in their twenties, thirties, or forties will find rich material here to display intense, sophisticated, or vulnerable casting types. It is particularly valuable for actors seeking classical drama that feels deeply psychological, grounded, and modern in its emotional intensity.

    Performance Tips

    Gustav must ground his delivery in calm, deliberate authority rather than overt villainy. Treat the description like a clinical observation, allowing the sheer specificity of your imagery to pull Adolph into the trap. For Adolph, resist the urge to anticipate the physical collapse or force nervous tension from the opening beat. Focus entirely on Gustav's words, letting your breathing and posture adjust involuntarily as the fear takes root in your body.

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