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    A Good Proposal

    from Road to Perdition

    Written by David Self, Max Allan Collins, Richard P. Rayner

    Road to Perdition

    Sullivan attempts to strike a deal with a mob boss to secure protection while he hunts down his family's killer, but is met with a cold rejection.

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    NITTI

    Sorry to keep you waiting so long, Mike.

    NITTI

    We all just heard what happened. Jesus, I’m sorry.

    SULLIVAN

    Thank you for seeing me Mr. Nitti.

    NITTI

    Come on, sit down. Would you like some coffee, or -

    SULLIVAN

    No.

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    Scene Notes & Audition Tips

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    About This Scene

    In this intense dramatic duologue from the Oscar-winning film Road to Perdition, Sullivan meets with mob boss Nitti under desperate circumstances. Sullivan attempts to trade his deadly enforcer skills for protection while he hunts down his family's killer, seeking an uneasy alliance. Instead of finding sympathy, he is met with pragmatic rejection, highlighting the brutal transactional nature of organized crime.

    Character Analysis

    Sullivan is an exhausted, grief-stricken anti-hero driven by vengeance, yet he tries to maintain composure and negotiate like a professional. He carries both profound personal devastation and urgent paternal responsibility, making his polite posture feel precarious. Nitti, by contrast, represents institutional criminal authority, remaining composed, rational, and unyielding. Nitti values organizational stability and self-interest over personal sentiment, delivering firm rejections with chilling, businesslike courtesy.

    Why This Works for Auditions

    This piece offers an exceptional showcase of subtext, restraint, and escalating psychological tension without relying on physical violence or overt shouting. Casting directors can instantly evaluate an actor’s ability to project power and vulnerability through quiet intensity and active listening. The sharp contrast between Sullivan's suppressed desperation and Nitti's immovable status gives both performers clear objectives and compelling tactical shifts.

    Best Suited For

    This material is ideal for male actors in their mid-thirties to late forties who want to display range in gritty, prestige dramatic roles. It serves performers suited for casting types such as authoritative crime bosses, conflicted leading men, grounded anti-heroes, and stoic professionals. It works exceptionally well for self-tapes, agent showcases, or scene study where nuanced stillness is required.

    Performance Tips

    Resist the urge to overplay Sullivan’s grief through outward weeping; his weariness and internal fury become far more captivating when held behind a fragile facade of dignity. For the actor playing Nitti, embrace physical stillness and steady vocal control to show effortless authority without ever raising your voice. Treat the dialogue as a high-stakes transaction where every look, pause, and unspoken thought carries life-or-death consequences.

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