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    Marty Robs Lloyd for Travel Money

    from Marty Supreme

    Written by Josh Safdie, Ronald Bronstein

    Marty Supreme

    Marty confronts Lloyd in the back room of a shoe store, demanding the money he believes he is owed for an upcoming trip. To Lloyd's surprise, Marty pulls a gun to escalate the situation, ultimately using a psychological tactic regarding their professional hierarchy to convince Lloyd to open the safe.

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    MARTY

    What was that?

    LLOYD

    What? You think I’m gonna rob you? Sorry, just a reflex.

    MARTY

    If I wanted to rob you you’d be dead. I just came in here to grab my suit.

    MARTY

    You know, I bought this specifically for my trip.

    LLOYD

    Not sure why a person needs a suit to play ping pong, but ok.

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    Scene Notes & Audition Tips

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    About This Scene

    Set in the back room of a shoe store, this intense comedy-drama duologue captures a desperate confrontation between Marty and Lloyd. Marty urgently needs cash owed to him for an upcoming trip, but when casual persuasion fails, he pulls a concealed gun from a desk drawer to dramatically raise the stakes. Rather than relying solely on brute force, Marty rapidly shifts tactics toward shrewd psychological manipulation, exploiting their professional workplace dynamic to convince Lloyd to unlock the safe.

    Character Analysis

    Marty operates on frantic confidence, rationalizing reckless criminal behavior through an unshakeable sense of entitlement and ambition. He transitions seamlessly from casual banter to armed intimidation, using sharp wit and persuasive logic once his initial violent bluff is called. Lloyd acts as the grounded, pragmatic foil, remaining largely unimpressed by Marty's theatrical posturing until Marty reframes the entire robbery as a convenient opportunity for Lloyd to rid himself of an obnoxious coworker.

    Why This Works for Auditions

    This selection offers actors an exceptional showcase for pacing, tonal modulation, and rapid tactical shifts within a tight two-minute duration. The writing expertly balances gritty naturalism with dark, situational humor, allowing performers to explore volatile character dynamics without losing authenticity. Casting directors and agents can immediately evaluate an actor's ability to drive a scene forward while sustaining real danger and high stakes under pressure.

    Best Suited For

    This duologue is ideally suited for male actors aged twenty-five to thirty-five preparing self-tapes, agency showcases, or competitive partner work. It provides dynamic material for performers targeting anti-hero, criminal, tough, or emotionally intense character types. Because the scene revolves around a grounded power struggle, it functions equally well for formal industry presentations and advanced camera practice.

    Performance Tips

    Avoid playing the firearm as purely villainous; treat it as an impromptu negotiating tool that Marty realizes is insufficient on its own. Keep the dialogue brisk, reactive, and conversational rather than overly stylized, allowing the underlying menace to surface through physical presence and precise comic timing. For Lloyd, resisting Marty's initial bluffs with quiet realism forces Marty to work harder, making the final psychological breakthrough earned and compelling.

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