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    Pilot — The Subway Tracks

    from You

    Written by Greg Berlanti & Sera Gamble

    You

    2 min · 2 characters · Any gender · 25-35

    Joe Goldberg stalks Beck at a subway station, observing her drunken behavior and internalizing his obsession through a dark internal monologue. The tension peaks when Beck, distracted by her phone and a homeless man, accidentally falls onto the tracks as a train approaches.

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    HOMELESS MAN

    Engine engine number nine, on the New York transit line....

    JOE’S THOUGHTS

    I was considering this with my new friend Mr. Insane Homeless Person when the second luckiest thing that happened to me this week happened...

    JOE’S THOUGHTS

    Could it really be? It feels like I’m dreaming.

    JOE’S THOUGHTS

    I’m not.

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    Scene Notes & Audition Tips

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    About This Scene

    Written by Greg Berlanti & Sera Gamble for the contemporary thriller series You, this scene captures a chilling sequence of covert surveillance inside a New York subway station. Joe Goldberg follows Beck underground, tracking her drunken movements from the shadows while dissecting her vulnerabilities through an obsessive internal monologue. As an erratic bystander chants nearby, the tension mounts rapidly until Beck drops her phone and accidentally plunges onto the subway tracks as a train approaches.

    Character Analysis

    Joe embodies a complex anti-hero whose quiet exterior conceals an intensely predatory, possessive nature disguised as protective chivalry. He views himself as Beck’s watchful guardian, judging her choices with cold detachment while genuinely believing his intrusion is justified. Beck appears thoroughly vulnerable and unguarded, entirely absorbed by her personal turmoil and digital communication. Joe’s unsettling ability to remain impassive during her sudden life-or-death crisis underscores the dark duality of his character.

    Why This Works for Auditions

    This piece offers an exceptional showcase for actors who want to demonstrate mastery over voiceover cadence, physical presence, and internal life. Because the dialogue relies heavily on private thoughts set against quiet physical observation, it forces the performer to convey deep psychological tension without relying on vocal projection. It allows casting directors to see how effectively you can build suspense, manage rapid tonal shifts, and hold an audience captive through active, stillness-driven listening.

    Best Suited For

    Actors in the 25 to 35 age bracket seeking to showcase leading man, anti-hero, or morally ambiguous villain archetypes will find this piece ideal. It works exceptionally well for self-tape appointments, agent showcases, and general audition practice where a contemporary thriller tone is required. Performers looking to demonstrate psychological depth and controlled intensity will stand out with this selection.

    Performance Tips

    Resist the temptation to play the internal monologue with broad villainy or obvious malice. Joe’s power comes from his absolute conviction that his surveillance is an act of love, so deliver the inner dialogue with intimate, conversational earnestness. Anchor your body in stillness behind the imaginary subway pillar and let your eyes track every subtle shift in your target's balance. When the sudden fall occurs, resist the urge to react immediately; let the audience see the calculating pause before the instinct to act takes over.

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