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The Credit Card Pitch

from Fargo

Written by Noah Hawley

Fargo

Loy Cannon and Doctor Senator pitch a revolutionary 'credit card' concept to a dismissive bank president in 1950s Kansas City. Despite the immense potential for profit through interest, the banker rejects the idea based on racial prejudice and a short-sighted view of consumer behavior. The scene highlights the systemic barriers faced by Black entrepreneurs and the irony of a billion-dollar idea being dismissed by a mediocre authority figure.

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WINCKLE: You boys find the place okay?

LOY CANNON: It’s the third largest bank in the state. We found it fine.

WINCKLE: Well, any friend of the alderman is a friend of mine. He tells me you’re a banker yourself. In your community.

LOY CANNON: We make personal and small business loans. This is my ass

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CharactersLoy Cannon, Doctor Senator, Clayton Winckle
Duration00:04:00
Age Range50s (Loy), 60s (Doctor Senator), 40s-50s (Winckle)
GenderMale
GenreCrime Drama
PeriodContemporary
Formatgroup
SourceFargo
ToneConfident, visionary, frustrated
AccentMidwestern
Suitable Foragent showcase, self tape, general practice
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